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2012-10-09 11:25:21昂立吴争

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  电脑阅卷2人一组组长台上监控两人分值不能相差太大4分?(仅供参考)超过额定分值退回重新批改(仅供参考)

  阅卷速度其实阅卷者每天有一定的阅卷量,真正停留在每个考生的阅卷时间其实还是有限的,但一定是充足的。教师每天在完成大量阅卷工作后,也会有一定的审美疲劳,所以首句一定要。。。大家懂得(个人意见,供参考)

  教师实际阅卷重点:

  首句。首句出错,印象非常糟糕

  连接词/逻辑

  未句

  内容/例子

  模版使用/套题 

Write at least 60 words about the topic “My plan for “

  图片省略

School activity/high school study/summer holidays future job

Use the following points as a reference.(以下问题仅供参考)

What is your plan about ? What have you planned ?

Why do you have such a plan? How are you going to do it ?

What result do you expect?

 

My plan for the summer holidays

I am a girl who is keen on travelling. As a junior three student, I don’t have too much spare time now , so I want to go travelling during my summer holidays. For me, I’ve planned to go to Japan, simply because travelling can broaden my horizon, cultivate my interest and enrich my life. What’s more,  I can make a large circle of friends there. I am going to get ready for this travelling .  I hope that my summer holidays will be meaningful and colorful.

(8+8+3)=19

 

My plan for future job

According to my mother “A good job makes people confident”. I think so. I want to be an engineer, because if I see my own building , I will be proud of myself. But there is a saying “No pains, no gains”. So is my point. First , it is important that I should learn physics well. Then I should collect different experice. Finally confidence must be full of my heart. To cut a long story, the harder I get, the shorter between facts and goal.

  (7+7+1)

  教学分享

  1.话题整合

  旅游(个人兴趣类)myhobby/atripwithmyfamily/myplan/Myweekend

  学习类(最好的学习方法)studybringsmehappiness/Themostboringsubject

  科技环保类(水资源保护)computerhavechangedmylife/waterresource

  个人经历类(考试失败/最难忘的事情/毕业感言/我和她friendsh/thefirsttimeIfailed

  感恩,抒情类(未来2个月打算/毕业话语)Mydream

 2011年作文:I  am a member of ..

 2010年作文:I am proud of myself

  2009年作文:Iwanttodosthformyschool

  2008年作文:Lovearoundme

  2007年作文:ThingsIhatetodo

  2006年作文:Ihaveadream

  2005年作文:Growing pain sand gains

  2004年作文:Leaving School

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