备战2014中考：南京初中英语作文指导和训练（二）(5)
(能量有什么作用). What’s more, diseases can be reduced by doing exercise. A lot of activities can be our nice choices, such as playing ball games, jogging, swimming and so on. Although doing exercise comes with a lot of advantages, we’d better do it properly and regularly or not do it too much at a time, otherwise, we may ______________________________________________________（不科学的运动有何后果）Above all, I hope our school can leave us more free time and offer us more opportunities to do exercise.
步骤（五）美化
可供参考的结尾句：Health always comes first.
Health is followed by everything else.
Nothing comes first except for health.
No health, no future.
The first wealth is health.
Happiness lies first of all in health.
Life is long if you know how to keep healthy.
步骤（六）检查
Exercise is very important to us students. Nowadays, we are under so much competition and pressure makes our health worse and worse. We have poor eyesight. We feel tired all day and have no enough energy for study. All these worried us. We need to do more activities, especially outdoor ones. We should take part in them, such as have ball games, running, swimming and so on, which we can keep healthy and strong ,study better and live happy. No matter how busily ,we hope teachers to leave us less homework to do so that we have free time to take part in sports .We also wish our school can offer us much more chance to do some activities which is good for us .
改错：1）审题
2）语法
3）行文
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