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句型单调，缺乏过渡

一篇文章如果简单句过多，句型单调，即使语法错误较少，思路较清晰，看后也会使人感到乏味。同学们应学会单句、复句交替使用，经常变换句型，尝试使用一些较复杂的语法结构及句型，适当运用过渡词，使文章更加连贯。

例:

They sleep fewer than eight hours every day. It has great influence on their health.

他们每天睡眠少于八小时，这对他们的健康有很大影响。

解析：这段话中使用的全部是简单句，句型比较单调，可以改为定语从句或加入插入语。

改为：Actually, they sleep fewer than eight hours every day, which will,no doubt, have great influence on their health.