【习作要求】

　　Writeaboutwhatyouaregoingtodoafteryouleaveschool.

　　【参考范文】

　　WhenIfinishschool，Iwanttobeateacher.Thoughteachersarepoorlypaidandtheyhavenopower，teachersarekind，

　　respectableandlearned，likeangels.

　　Theyleadthepathwaytosucceed.It‘squitesurethatteachersareveryimportantinmodernworld.

　　Wecan’tdevelopourcountrywithoutknowledge.

　　Teachersteachusknowledge.Ilikeallofmyteachersinmyschool.IwouldliketobeanEnglishteacher.

　　It‘sveryimportantforthestudentstolearnEnglishwelltoday.

　　I’lltrymybesttobeanidealteacher.Mystudentscanmakeourcountrybetterinthefuture.

　　【名师点评】

　　这是一篇阐述观点的议论文，作者用简洁而流畅的语言表达了长大后想成为一名老师的愿望。论据充分，观点明确，并且字里行间渗透了对祖国的无比热爱之情和把祖国建设更加美好的。