2015北京西城区中考二模英语试题答案(6)
五．写作
范文：
Nowadays, more and more middle school students get pocket money from their parents. For my part, we students should have some pocket money. However, we must spend it wisely.
I have pocket money as well. Usually, I spend most of my pocket money in buying books, for the reason that I am interested in reading. And I spend some money on daily use. You know, sometimes I'd like to hang out with my friends.
But how can we manage our pocket money better? Here is my advice: on one hand, we'd better make a plan at the beginning of the month. On the other hand, it is important for us to save a proper amount of money each month. As long as you do like this, I believe you can manage pocket money better.
A. 话题：观点建议类，中学生零花钱
B. 要点及时态
1. 观点：学生该不该有零花钱
2. 平常你的零花钱是如何花的
3. 建议：如何更好地管理零花钱
时态：主要是一般现在时
C. 范文分析
1. 结构完整，要点齐全。
2. Nowadays, more and more middle school students get pocket money from their parents. For my part, we students should have some pocket money. 指出当前存在的现象，紧接着表明观点；
3. However, we must spend it wisely. 过渡句，引出下文；
4. I have pocket money as well, 注意"也"的各种表达方式；
5. I spend most of my pocket money in buying books, for the reason that I am interested in reading. 句型spend...in doing sth. ；短语for the reason that"因为"；
6. But how can we manage our pocket money better? Here is my advice. 一问一答，直接将问题摆出来，增加文章句式多样性；
7. on one hand, on the other hand，一方面，另一方面；
8. 句型we'd better do sth., it is important for sb. to do sth.
9. 结尾点题，句型as long as表示"只要……就"。
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